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Friday, January 28, 2011

Friday Flash Fiction: Flash of Light


Dammit, what happened to his meeting? We waited so long for this. Our poems and confessions--our collective raunch--were all just a prologue. I tore at her skin when finally I saw her. I wanted only to taste her. But with my flattened tongue between her breasts, I felt her heart stop as the  front door slammed.

Over my echoing pulse, I could barely hear their mumbling. How was she covering? Did he notice my bra on his reading chair? Did he notice my perfume on her lips and breasts?

Held protectively by the wardrobe's darkness, I hear her implore, "Here, give me your coat--no, wait!" And with a flash of light I am revealed.

"Ah, so I see you have met my secretary," he says.

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Here was this week's prompt:
Your challenge for this Friday, 1-28-11, is to use the photo above to write a flash fiction of 93-129 words. Since everyone seems to be enjoying the required phrases, please use this phrase in your submission: "...held protectively..."
Photo courtesy of Erotic Flash Fiction, author unkown.
Posted by Dioneo at 12:00 AM
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12 comments:

  1. AnonymousJanuary 28, 2011 at 2:08 AM

    LOL! That's a good one. ;-)

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  2. DrenchxoxoJanuary 28, 2011 at 12:39 PM

    I'd bet there is a wonderful part 2 to this!

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 28, 2011 at 4:58 PM

    LOL!!! Ah, and won't that make life at the office interesting? I enjoyed this one.

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  4. DavidJanuary 29, 2011 at 10:24 AM

    One wonders if he contrived with his secretary to seduce or test the wife, a nice take off on the story. Nice surprise ending.

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  5. Raven RedJanuary 29, 2011 at 11:19 AM

    LOL!! Loved it!!

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  6. AnonymousJanuary 29, 2011 at 6:02 PM

    Great twist...I wonder if his secretary had been in a similar position before, with the wife unaware...

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  7. AnonymousJanuary 30, 2011 at 1:39 PM

    Excellent, thank you!

    Good writing as usual. Nice build of the frenzy frantic feeling. Kudos on the secretary twist...I didn't see that coming.

    -H

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  8. DioneoJanuary 31, 2011 at 12:19 AM

    Thanks, Sweets! It's an inspiring photo!

    Thanks, Kirsti! You know, I haven't tried to write sequels to any of these yet. Maybe this is a good one to start with!

    Thanks, Word Wytch! I'd say both office life *and* home life are about to get much more interesting for that fellow.

    Thanks, David! Or perhaps he contrived with his wife to seduce the secretary--enticing plot either way!

    Thanks, Raven! This photo has been floating around Tumblr for months, so I was excited when I saw that it was the selection for the week.

    Thanks, Pink! He does seem pretty nonchalant about seeing his secretary in her panties, doesn't he? Perhaps they're all just completing the circle here...er, triangle.

    Thanks, Hedone! It was fun to take on the role of a naked girl trapped in a dark closet, afraid of discovery...actually, I kept getting distracting by the fantasy of a naked girl trapped in *my* closet waiting for me to discover her. Mmmm, wardrobe sex...

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  9. AnonymousFebruary 2, 2011 at 9:46 AM

    Ha! So how many times a day do you check your closet? ;-)

    -H

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  10. DioneoFebruary 2, 2011 at 2:51 PM

    Hedone, I just checked again. Sadly, she's still not there. :( Perhaps all the geek clutter stashed in there is driving her away.

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  11. {ÍsisdoEgito}JZ - Tua, somente tuaFebruary 18, 2011 at 11:15 AM

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  12. DioneoFebruary 19, 2011 at 8:42 AM

    Obrigado, ÍsisdoJUN, e bem vindo!

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