Seam of heaven torn,
Sky births sea.
Dropless rain pummels
Without compassion.
Our clothes, our hair, our skin
Saturated.
Our lust insatiate.
Our thirst unquenched.
Violent deluge chokes our sight,
But washes not away the taste of skin.
Entangled, we feast,
To consume one another
Before taken by the sea,
To meet our end
Not with a whimper,
But an orgasmic scream
That almost pushes back the torrent.
For while pure in heart,
We were not in mind nor deed,
And so denied boarding,
Cast away,
Driven, beaten, hammered with invective,
From deliverance-vessel.
Left,
To drown as we revel,
To die as we have lived,
To burn as we have loved.
Lost in the diluvial finish,
The ultimate embrace,
The last dance of the damned.
Image provided by Luna Mauvaise, original source unknown.Your challenge for this Friday, 7-9-10, was to use the photo above to write a flash fiction of 48-148 words. I also provided a key phrase for use somewhere in the submission: "...driven, beaten, hammered..."
This is amazing! I think I am breathless, or perhaps I only forgot to breathe! Goodness, truly, this is beautiful. It captures soul and surrender, fear and desire.
ReplyDeleteI love it! Great job!
Thank you so much, Jae! I was kind of worried this one was a flop (which, hey, happens sometimes). But I really enjoyed writing it and am pleased with the result. I'm glad that you enjoyed it as well!
ReplyDeleteLove the picture and the poem, bravo!
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