Across the floor, he spotted her nude form. Her body glowed in the
wash of crimson light, a beacon in the darkened room, beckoning his
approach. She said nothing as he neared, nor as he wrapped his arm
around her belly. They now bask in one another, their bodies
radiating in the cold emptiness of the room. As their temperatures
rise, her sex melts over him and they become one, fused like molten
steel in their ardent fuck. Their skin bleeds together as they rock
back and forth in the glow. United, forged in passion, they stand
apart from the world, a single flame in the darkness.
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Your challenge for this Friday, 8-13-10, is to use the photo above to write a flash fiction of 80-120 words. Since everyone seems to be enjoying the required phrases, please use this phrase in your submission: "...her body glowed in the wash of crimson light..."Image courtesy of Carter Vaughn, via Erotic Flash Fiction.
Her sex melts on him- very hot! Happy FFF!
ReplyDeleteKatia
Gosh, this is beautiful. Your eloquence robs me of mine.
ReplyDeleteHot.
wow, ardent fuck it is... I like the way you play with the words.
ReplyDeletePowerful stuff, D, powerful stuff. I loved the melting together; it's such an apt metaphor.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Katia and Lexi! I really liked the image that the "melting" brings to mind.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Pink! You have more than enough eloquence, so I'm happy to steal some of it.
Thank you, R! I actually struggled with finding the right adjective here, but "ardent" seemed to fit the bill nicely.
Loved everything in this passage. I echo comments above. Eloquent and vivid.
ReplyDelete~CP
"Better to light a single candle than to curse the darkness," indeed. Except this flame is far more than a candle. I'm glad you're joining us for FFF these days!
ReplyDelete-- PB
Thanks, Chocolate Puss! I'm glad you enjoyed.
ReplyDeleteThanks, PB! I enjoy being involved with FFF. I hope the flame continues to burn.